29/07/2012

my poem

Last night
last night I went to bed
there was a monster in my bed
I was very scared
he was a big blue blob
I named him bob
there was hair in his toes
there was hair coming from his nose
he looked at me with his beady eyes
he smelt me with his blue nose
he ate me
I screamed
I cried
mum came to the rescue
she put me back in bed
it was just a dream, she said

4 comments:

  1. A very cool poem. It's great to see you rhyming some parts because it helps it flow.-Mum

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  2. Cool poem. I like it how it rhymes allot. It is funny how you said "he was a big blue blob
    I named him bob."

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  3. Thanks what are you doing for yours.

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  4. Yeah it's a really awesome poem and Ashleigh likes it too.

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